iloveuskylaglu iloveuskylaglu

24-10-2017
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the catfish was eaten by him, and he enjoyed the dinner very much.
is this improper use of voice
or wordiness or unclear meaning

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Darklightning Darklightning

24-10-2017

I would say it is too wordy. Try breaking it into 2 sentences or combining them better.

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